28.Many animal species in the world are becoming extinct nowadays. Some people say that countries and individuals should protect these animals from dying out, while others say we should concentrate more on problems of human beings. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is argued that a lot of animal types are in extinction, some say that all people should save these

animals

,

while

others would argue that humans’

problems

are more important.

While

the scarcity of some

animals

might be caused by

individuals

, I believe that the

problems

that people are facing are more important. On the one hand, humans have done many activities that caused damage to the planet, and

as a consequence

, some

animals

are affected too,

that is

why

individuals

should protect these

animals

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since it is their fault. Another reason is that some

animals

carry out activities which are important for all living things, and without them,

animals

cannot be alive.

For example

, bees are essential for the reproduction of plants, since they take pollen from one place to another.

Then

, if these

animals

disappear,

then

plants will decrease in huge amounts, and

as a consequence

, a reduction of oxygen, since the plants produce them.

However

, I believe that

this

can be solved by solving the catastrophes caused by humans and with the technology that there is.

On the other hand

, people

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lots of

problems

that affect all living things in the world,

such

as contamination, global warming and climate change. These

problems

if are not solved, the planet will be increasingly damaged, since there are many issues related. Solving the main troubles, the others will be solved too.

For instance

, it has been shown that the lack of fresh water, the melting ice of the poles and the

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weather, all these are caused because of activities that humans are carrying out. I believe

this

point of view is preferable because it will solve a lot of

problems

at the same time, and will save the world. In conclusion,

although

the vanishing of some

animals

is caused by

individuals

, solving the issues that

individuals

are facing will

also

solve the problem of the extinction of

animals

, and

that is

why it is more important to focus on people’s

problems

.