You have a Facebook friend living in another country and s/he is curious to learn about a major news item in your country. Write a letter to your Facebook friend. In your letter describe a news story in your country explain why people are interested in it say how the story personally relates to you

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Hey Deeksha! How are you? I hope

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letter finds you in good health and high spirits. I was thrilled to receive your letter where you mentioned your interest in knowing detailed information about the upcoming Olympic games that are taking place in Canada. As you already know my country of residence got the honour of hosting the 2024 Olympic games.

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great news is published by punchy media

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as Instagram and Facebook. It's

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the headline of many newspapers across the globe.

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competition is taking place in Toronto in the month of March. All the citizens of my nation are incredibly excited about

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wonderful news because they will get a chance to watch live matches.

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, it will enhance my country's revenue as a multitude of gathering is coming to our country next year. I'm enthusiastic because I'm a part of the National Sports Stadium.

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my schedule will be hectic during

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event because I have to work overtime as an employee of the sports department, I will get five free passes to enjoy live matches; I can bring my friends and family to the stadium as well. I'm excited and ready to capture some unforgettable moments. Best regards Sandy

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task achievement

Provide more specific details about the Olympic games, such as the different sports involved and any notable athletes or teams participating.

lexical resource

Use more varied and precise vocabulary to enhance your writing.

grammatical range and accuracy

Include more complex sentence structures to demonstrate a wider range of grammatical structures.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

205 words

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