You have a Facebook friend living in another country and s/he is curious to learn about a major news item in your country. Write a letter to your Facebook friend. In your letter describe a news story in your country explain why people are interested in it say how the story personally relates to you

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Hey Deeksha! How are you? I hope

this

letter finds you in good health and high spirits. I was thrilled to receive your letter where you mentioned your interest in knowing detailed information about the upcoming Olympic games that are taking place in Canada. As you already know my country of residence got the honour of hosting the 2024 Olympic games.

This

great news is published by punchy media

such

as Instagram and Facebook. It's

also

the headline of many newspapers across the globe.

This

competition is taking place in Toronto in the month of March. All the citizens of my nation are incredibly excited about

this

wonderful news because they will get a chance to watch live matches.

Moreover

, it will enhance my country's revenue as a multitude of gathering is coming to our country next year. I'm enthusiastic because I'm a part of the National Sports Stadium.

Although

my schedule will be hectic during

this

event because I have to work overtime as an employee of the sports department, I will get five free passes to enjoy live matches; I can bring my friends and family to the stadium as well. I'm excited and ready to capture some unforgettable moments. Best regards Sandy

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

205 words

8.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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