Some people prefer to work on school projects with a group, while others would rather work alone. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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Students have two opposing mindsets when it comes to school
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some prefer working alone, others would rather
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in teams. Like how there are two sides to a coin, both have their advantages and disadvantages.
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, I unequivocally believe that working with a
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is more beneficial as it teaches skills that are more necessary in the real world. On the one hand, working alone would be time-consuming as an individual has to do all the
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alone.
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it could mean that the individual learns more, it could get lonely.
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,
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working alone the motivation factor from other team members is absent, and
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in many
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projects
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do not get completed.
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, when teachers from CV school were interviewed
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year, many revealed that
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projects
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were submitted on time when compared to
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that were done individually.
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, working in teams has many advantages.
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communication with other team members, builds communication skills that are vital
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working in a company or organisation.
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, the
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gets done faster as the
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gets divided among the members and each section is conquered separately.
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working in a
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, different opinions and inputs come from all directions.
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, the University of Madras conducted a survey which published that companies prefer hiring people who
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better in groups than individually. In conclusion, working in a
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develops the skills needed to live in the real world, even though working alone may help one learn more.
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Provide a clear thesis statement in the introduction that outlines the main points that will be discussed.
coherence cohesion
Include a concluding paragraph that summarizes the main points and restates your opinion.
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Use more varied vocabulary throughout the essay.
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Pay attention to subject and verb agreement.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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