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The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities.

The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities.
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The provided table illustrates the underground
railway
 systems namely
date
Correct article usage
the date
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 opened, kilometres of route and
passengers
 per
year
 in six different cities (London, Paris, Tokyo, Washington DC, Kyoto,
Los
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and Los
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 Angeles).
Overall
,
railway
Correct article usage
the railway
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 in Tokyo city is the most productive transportation than
five
Correct article usage
the five
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 other cities,
while
 Kyoto is in reverse.
To begin
 with,
Railway
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the Railway
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 in Tokyo was opened in 1927, and already
go
Correct subject-verb agreement
goes
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 through 155 km distances. Tokyo’s
railway
 marks the highest
passengers
Correct quantifier usage
number of passengers
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 per
year
 with 1927
million
. Paris’s
railway
 was operated in 1900 and
record
Wrong verb form
recorded
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 199 km in
distances
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distance
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 has around 1191
million
passengers
 per
year
.
Eventhough
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Even though
, London’s
Railway
 systems are the oldest (opened in 1863) among five
others
Correct quantifier usage
other
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 cities, they ranked third in the number of
passengers
 per
year
 (775
million
 per
year
). The fourth ranked (144
million
 per
year
),
there
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apply
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is
Washington
Correct article usage
the Washington
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 DC
railway
 that was operated in 1976 with 126 kilometres of route.
Furthermore
, Los Angeles is the youngest
railway
 among five others, but
its
Correct pronoun usage
it
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 records more
passengers
 (50
million
) than Kyoto
that
Correct pronoun usage
which
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 was opened in 1981. Kyoto’s
railway
 records the lowest
passengers
Correct quantifier usage
number of passengers
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 per
year
 (45
million
)
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words railway, passengers, year, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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