The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given table provides information about the underground railway systems (date opened, kilometres of
route
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, and
passenger
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passengers
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per year) in six different cities (London, Paris,
Tokyo
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, Washington DC,
Kyoto
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, and
Los
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Angeles
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).
Overall
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,
Tokyo
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and Paris had more than 1,000 numbers of
travelers
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,
while
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London, Washington DC,
Los
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Angeles
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, and
Kyoto
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had fewer than 1,000
passengers
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. Interestingly,
Los
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Angeles
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was the only city that opened in the 2000-year.
To begin
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with,
Tokyo
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had the highest passenger number in 1927
passengers
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which began to operate in 1900 and had 155
kilometers
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of
route
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. Paris, which opened 27 years earlier than
Tokyo
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(1990) had 1191
passengers
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in 199 Kilometer of
route
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.
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London, which opened in 1863 was 394
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long,
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775 customers.
Then
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100 years later, Washington DC started to operate in 1976 at 144
passengers
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in 126
kilometers
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of
route
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.
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, in the latest year,
Kyoto
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and
Los
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Angeles
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had the lowest number of
passengers
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per year at 45 and 50 respectively.
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, the oldest cities are the higher
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kilometers
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of
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route
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the route
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they had, excluding
Kyoto
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.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 75%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words route, tokyo, kyoto, los, angeles, passengers, kilometers with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "numbers of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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