You are working for an international company and you would like to request time off for a family event. Write a letter to your boss Explaining what the celebration is Asking for the time off Explaining how you can get work done when you take time off

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Dear Mr. Park, I am writing

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requesting you to approve my leave for a family function which is going to be held next weekend. Next weekend on 9th November 2023, there is a baby shower function for my elder sister, held in my home town. As my whole family has planned to attend the same, and I

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want to congratulate her personally, I want to attend the event. As the function is on Sunday morning, I would like to grant my leave from 8th November 2023, Saturday to 10th November 2023, Monday. It will be a total of 3 days of leave including Sunday. During my travelling hours, I will be carrying both my laptop and mobile with me, to be connected with the rest of the team. In any case of

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I have requested Ms. Sina to take

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. I will make assure not to affect work-related issues. Looking for your approval of leave. Yours faithfully, Jen Kale.

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