There are some problems in the changing room in your sport center. Write a letter to the sport center manager. In your letter, you should: - Describe the problems in the changing room - Explain why the sport center is important for you - Suggest what the manager should do

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Dear Manager, It is Sarvinoz. I request to prevent some drawbacks of dress altering room. These have been affecting our improvement
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related to our training. Well,
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room
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situated
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behind
training
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the training
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. Writing about problems,
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, Sunlight falls. It impacts
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our eyes and we have a headache.
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, We can not do sports well.
Sport
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center
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have
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always been playing an essential role in our lifestyle.Why? Because
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this
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place is our motherland, For our getting high goals,
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center
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helped us without a doubt. Dear manager, please, we will ask you to amend
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are
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given problems again for our growth. I consider that
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You work out
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minuses with a
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decision. I am looking forward to
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your response with hope. Thank you for your answer in advance. Sincerely, Jumayeva Sarvinoz.
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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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