The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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process

try

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to

illustrates

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us

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how we are able to harvest

the

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apply

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energy from the earth and

turned

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that

to

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the

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apply

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electricity for

consuming

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consumption

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According

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this

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diagram, we must dig the hole for 4.5

Kilometer

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and pump down the cold

water

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to reach the geothermal zone. After that, the cold

water

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start

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to

being

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be

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warm and

turning

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to

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apply

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steam

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. By turning

a

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cold

water

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to hot

water

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, the

steam

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start

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to

pumping

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up from the earth and we collect that in

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box called

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box contains a nozzle

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that compact

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compact

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compacts

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the

steam

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and

push

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pushes

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that very hard to

turbine

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the turbine

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. With

circuling

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circling

circulating

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steam

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around

of

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the turbine, it

begin

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begins

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to turn around and with connection to the generator we can produce the

elecrticity

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electricity

. In general, we produce electricity without any

pollutions

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pollution

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These kind

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of power plants would

be help

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us to save our environment. We must try hard to expand these power plants which are green and

environmental

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environmentally

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friendly.