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The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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This
 process
try
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tries
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 to
illustrates
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illustrate
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us
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to us
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 how we are able to harvest
the
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apply
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energy from the earth and
turned
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turn
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 that
to
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apply
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the
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apply
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electricity for
consuming
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consumption
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.
According
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According to
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this
 diagram, we must dig the hole for 4.5
Kilometer
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Kilometers
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 and pump down the cold
water
 to reach the geothermal zone. After that, the cold
water
start
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starts
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 to
being
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be
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 warm and
turning
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turns
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 to
the
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apply
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steam
. By turning
a
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apply
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cold
water
 to hot
water
, the
steam
start
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starts
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 to
pumping
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pump
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 up from the earth and we collect that in
the
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a
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 box called
Condenser
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a Condenser
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.
This
 box contains a nozzle
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that compact
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compact
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compacts
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 the
steam
 and
push
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pushes
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 that very hard to
turbine
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the turbine
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. With
circuling
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circling
circulating
 the
steam
 around
of
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apply
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the turbine, it
begin
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begins
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 to turn around and with connection to the generator we can produce the
elecrticity
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electricity
. In general, we produce electricity without any
pollutions
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pollution
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.
These kind
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This kind
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 of power plants would
be help
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help
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 us to save our environment. We must try hard to expand these power plants which are green and
environmental
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environmentally
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 friendly.
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Linking words: Add some linking words.
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Linking words: Add more linking words.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, steam with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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  • Use simple words and lack vocabulary.
  • Feel nervous and anxious when speaking.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • geothermal energy
  • renewable source
  • sustainable
  • drilling wells
  • hot water and steam
  • drive turbines
  • generate electricity
  • conversion
  • cooling process
  • re-injected
  • efficiency
  • environmental impact
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