most people have forgotten the meaning behind a traditional religious festivals; during festival periods, people nowadays only want to enjoy themselves. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
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festivals
is forgotten and that Use synonyms
people
attend these ceremonies for more recreational purposes. Use synonyms
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I agree that it has become more common to have fun during Linking Words
festivals
, I believe that there are still some commitments to traditions that lead to Use synonyms
peopl's
appearance.
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people's
festivals
have their roots in the past when Use synonyms
people
had to arrange them to protect their lives or even be safe from religious punishments Use synonyms
although
they may not have that much seriousness for today's generation. Linking Words
For example
, in some traditional tribes, members had to present a symbolic prayer for god in the spring to offer their admiration Linking Words
as well as
respect and Linking Words
therefore
guarantee the survival of their lands and cultivation in the following year, Linking Words
otherwise
they might lose yields. In comparison, nowadays Linking Words
people
have no need for Use synonyms
such
a festival to protect their lives.
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On the other hand
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festivals
as ways of enjoyment, Use synonyms
people
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with
whatever their ancestors believe. Take mourning as an instance, modernized Change preposition
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people
may not mourn as deeply as their old generation did for an old well-known person or they may even see it as a recreative event, but they Use synonyms
also
show their respect and give importance to its religious aspects by gathering and doing symbolic mourning. By doing Linking Words
this
, they not only protect traditions and customs from being vanished but Linking Words
also
promote them to be in the minds of future ones.
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although
the main aspects of presenting Linking Words
festivals
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people
have fun during the festival period, there are still firm beliefs about them in their minds.Use synonyms
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