Get rid of old things to get the newest fashion and the latest technology. Do the disadvantages of a throwaway society outweigh advantages????

It is certain to notice the mentality of
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to constantly upgrade themselves with the latest
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and
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as soon as it is available in the market.
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my perspective getting ahead of
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things and
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is a must for today’s rapid fast
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and the benefits of doing so
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the drawbacks of it. My reasoning for it is justified in the upcoming paragraphs with valid points and appropriate examples that should be noted. The Major advantage
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me for
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practice is that the economy of the particular nation keeps on increasing to surpass other nations in terms of
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power. The introduction of new objects to ease the routine of
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attracts them. The more is the usefulness of
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the more is the number of
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who are going to switch on to new items and just pass on the old ones to someone in need.
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way the market will have a constant flow of money and the companies will keep on evolving.
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, another advantage
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doing so is
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that the
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in need
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low
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and
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afford the latest
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will receive the old items from someone as a gift, or as in charity, or the prices of the old items will just fall down by the introduction of new
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and fashion. In
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manner
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people
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can be helped by introducing them
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the
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that will make their
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life
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better. Another plus point for
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is that the world is evolving at a constant pace and
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need to move toe to toe with it so that they are not left behind and they get to exploit the advanced technologies and enjoy the latest
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. As humans
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bored of old things they start to demand
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new advancements in their current technologies. That calls for the major companies and manufacturers to stay ahead of their competition and
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invent objects and create new
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to entertain humans and make our
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life
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easy and fast up to an extent.
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will eventually help us all to grow more and more. To get a
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example
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is advancement in the mobile industry, the giant mobile company of India, once denoted as
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most dominating in the
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smartphone market, dropped down to the bottom for not upgrading
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mobile
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and its competition managed to get ahead of them by giving us the upgraded, powerful and more reliable smartphones.
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, as there’s a saying that every coin has two faces, there’s a downside
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of
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switch to
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new
technology
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and
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, the maintenance of the old
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out things
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harder and harder. It gets tough to keep everything in check as
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of services can be
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only available for the new
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. Adding to it, we
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see
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getting fear of missing out
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the
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and feeling left out and
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they go on to make really bad decisions that can just mess up their
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life
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financially or in any other way.
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it is clear that
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sustainable development in technologies and fashion
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is tough and expensive to discover at first and
people
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tend to worsen the environment and wildlife just for the sake of development.

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