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tourism is always a force for good which enables people of different countries to understand each other do you agree or disagree?

#tourism #force #people #countries
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tourism
 in the world today is widely debated, others claim that it is indeed a force for international understanding.
However
,
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 personally accept
this
, and
i
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 will explain why in
this
 essay. Arguably, there could be reasons why
tourism
 is crucially important.
Initially
,
tourism
 is sustainable developing day by day because not
merely
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 people but
also
 governments can make money,
in addition
, if visitors visit
other country
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another country
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, they can ameliorate their panache, in terms of culture or
language
.
For example
, in
western
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countries
, there are numerous traditional things
such
 as
cloths
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 and
other form
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 of items like weapons
as a result
 foreigners can purchase these kinds of items for their families or
close-knits
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.
Furthermore
, the majority of
tourism
, which may lead to
better
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 understanding
languages
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 or
gesture
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each other,
this
 meanings it is
the
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 superb option for
purpose
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 of learning modern
language
. These range from
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English
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language
 to
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Russian
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language
 as both of them are more common
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language
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among
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tourism
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. Notwithstanding
waste
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 of money or time, most individuals of
tourism
, who
can
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 aware of
history
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 of eclectic
countries
,
for instance
,
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the book "
father
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 of
history
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" by George Thomson, who
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 teachers of
history
also
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said that all teachers of
this
 subject witnessed travel to overseas
countries
 for
history
 purposes. In a nutshell, in spite of some downsides,
tourism
 is
better
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 option for establishing relationships among
countries
 and
i
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 strongly believe that
tourism
 brings merely benefits to our life
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task achievement
Provide more specific examples to support your arguments.
coherence cohesion
Make sure to have a clear introduction and conclusion.
lexical resource
Use more precise and academic language.
grammatical range accuracy
Check the grammar and sentence structure.

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs

The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.

A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).

Stick to this essay structure:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion

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