The diagram below shows how to recycle organic waste to produce garden fertilizer (compost). Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The diagram illustrates the process of converting organic waste into garden fertilizers within 6 months.
Overall
, there are 5 steps
to transform organic excess into useful garden fertilizers.
The diagram shows that the 1st and 3rd steps
requires
actual labour from the Change the verb form
require
reader
. Both these steps
require work as they ask the reader
to place organic waste into the plastic container and pour in nitrogen as well as
hot water respectively.
On the contrary
, for the 4th and 5th step, the reader
is only required observations and time. The 4th step is done through the use of heat to convert the waste into fertilizer. Similarly
, the 5th step is only to observe the final results which consist of the garden compost. From this
diagram, it can be inferred that the process of transferring excess to compost does not requires
much energy from the Change the verb form
require
reader
as only ⅖ steps
ask the reader
to actually do labouring work.Submitted by yeshomeclass on
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