The chart shows the unemployment situation in Australia in the year 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart illustrates the
unemployment
situation in Australia in 2012.
Overall
, in the first fourth of the year the rural and urban fields were at completely different places and in the fourth quarter
these areas
came out to approximately 5 per cent
. The unemployment
rate in the rural fields, in the beginning, was between 6 and 7 per cent
, while
the urban areas
started at nearly 2.1 per cent
.
However
, in the second quarter
, the situation totally changed, Urban areas
sharply declined from 6.5 to 4.5 per cent
, whereas
urban areas
dramatically increased to 4 per cent
. By the third quarter
, the unemployment
rate of urban areas
enormously dropped again to approximately 2.1 per cent
, but the rural areas
gradually rose to 5.4 per cent
and straightaway fell to 5 per cent
.
The unemployment
rate of Rural and Urban areas
in Australia in 2012 in the fourth quarter
was on the same level, namely the Urban area was at 4.8 per cent
and the Rural area was at 5 per cent
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