The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane.

The diagram illustrates the manufacturing process for producing

sugar

from

sugar

cane

.

Overall

, the harvested

sugar

cane

that is

grown enough is crushed until it generates a

juice

liquid. The next additional steps will form

sugar

crystals

contained in the

juice

substance, where these

crystals

are eventually

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extracted and become

a

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sugar

.

Firstly

,

sugar

cane

is planted until it turns ripe after 12 to 18 months of growing.

Then

farmers harvest

this

sugar

cane

either using their hands or

tractor

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. Afterwards, a wheel machine crushes the

sugar

cane

until a

juice

liquid flows out of the machine.

This

juice

liquid must be placed in a bowl or container before moving to the purifying stage. The

juice

liquid must be filtered using

limestone

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filter until it becomes purified.

Subsequently

, the purified

juice

must be heated using

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to

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it into syrup.

This

syrup contains

sugar

crystals

, so a centrifuge step is taken to separate them. The

last

stage is drying and cooling the

sugar

crystals

,

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which we call

them

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as

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sugar

later.