The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.

The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.
The pie chart above illustrates the proportion of what
Anthropology
graduates
from a specific university do after getting their bachelor’s degree,
whereas
the table above displays the percentage of
Anthropology
graduates
earning a certain number of salaries after working for five years based on their type of employment. The majority of
Anthropology
graduates
are either working or continuing their studies.
Further
, the majority of those who work as freelance consultants or work for the government have salaries above $75,000, which is a different case for those working in private companies. Mostly, the destination of
Anthropology
graduates
after completing undergraduate degree
course
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are either working or continuing study to post-graduate level. More than half of
Anthropology
graduates
are employed as full-time workers. The least preferred option among these
Anthropology
graduates
is to do both work and study. There is a substantial percentage of
Anthropology
graduates
who earn $75,000 and beyond, reaching 80% for those choosing to be a freelance consultant or working in the government sector respectively.
However
, a significant salary discrepancy is not found among those who are employed by private companies. A little more than 30% of them earn between $50,000 - $74,999, which is a similar proportion of those who earn above $100,000.
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