In many countries, obesity and unhealthy eating habits are increasing. What are the reasons for this trend? What is the most effective way to prevent it?

It is widely known that a growing

trends

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of unhealthy eating habits and obesity become a major

problems

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problem

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in many parts of the world. In my opinion, those

health

problems are driven by the rise of shifting

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that most people nowadays strive to live their simplest life, and the most viable

solutions

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is

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consistently placing

health

as our priority in life. Since the world

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dominated by the younger generations, we have seen their preferences to find the easiest way in everything.

This

fact has

proven

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by the growing presence of lifestyle

apps

that we can easily

used

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in

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our

smartphone

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smartphones

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, ranging from food delivery services, ride-hailing, and

online-grocery

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shop

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. There is no doubt that these

apps

are very helpful to

fulfill

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our primary needs yet have unconsciously

risen

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our dependency on their technology. Since they are competing to win the market, we have offered lots of promotions that encouraged us to use their

apps

frequently. As part of their users, I have seen various discount offered by their fast food merchant which are very tempting and leads me to purchase an order.

This

case

also

happened with the ride-hailing

apps

that persuade us to use their service even though we can reach our destination by walking. If

these

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behavior

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occurs regularly, it couldn’t be denied that the benefit of using those

apps

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increased

our

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fast-food consumption and

lessening

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exercises

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, which

formed

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a

poorly

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diet

and obesity. To tackle that problem, I

supposed

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to think that we can prevent overweight and unhealthy

diet

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by prioritizing

health

over simplicity. Taking into

actions

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, we can encourage ourselves not to use any transportation

in

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within

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a

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apply

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walking distance. I had tried to make

this

kind of prioritization in controlling my

diet

,

such

as making limitations in ordering fast food

by

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only once

in

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a week. Maintaining these small steps consistently would help us to live a healthier life,

as well as

prevent ourselves from fatness and develop

healthy

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diet

. In conclusion, the increasing trends of problems

due to

unhealthy habits

grows

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accordingly

with the rising

behavior

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behaviour

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of simplicity.

However

, we can deal with

this

phenomenon by

committed

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ourselves in regards with putting

health

as our top priority.

Therefore

, we are able to make wiser

decision

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to maintain

simple

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a simple

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yet healthy lifestyle.