The two maps below show the changes that have taken place in the town of Westley since 1815. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show the changes that have taken place in the town of Westley since 1815.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two maps illustrate the transformation of Westley from 1815 to the current year.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the
town
has undergone huge changes since 1815 with various developments with regard to modern buildings and more comfortable transportation networks have taken place.
However
, the
town
hall in the city
centre
remained. The principal transformation has witnessed the central area, which has been chopped down Lenton Woods, that has made way to Lenton Housing Estate. The church has been demolished in order to construct the Shopping
Centre
.
Also
, on the East Bank of the river, there is a Sports
Centre
with the museum, which has been replaced by the Coach Inn.
Additionally
, Houses in the South part of the
town
has been transformed into Business and Residential Area.
Nevertheless
, the
Town
Hall and Market Square remain the same,as in 1815. Regarding the transportation network, there has been an extension of the main road of Westley, with the addition of a lot of forks in the
Centre
of the
town
.
Besides
, there has been the huge construction of the train station and railway that leads to London.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words town, centre with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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