The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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These charts depict the selling amount of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in five European nations during 1999 and 2004.
The sales of coffee in these regions all increased, especially in
UK
, which dramatically raised from 1.5 to 20 million Correct article usage
the UK
of
euros. Meanwhile, in Switzerland, Change preposition
apply
the
sales in 2004(6) Correct article usage
apply
doubles
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doubled
the
Correct article usage
apply
one
in 1999(3). Correct pronoun usage
apply
By contrast
, the numbers related to Denmark, Belgium, and Sweden grew slightly by 0.2 to 0.7, which Linking Words
just
under 2 in 2004.
In comparison, Add a missing verb
was just
although
the Linking Words
overall
trade quantity of bananas surged from 1999 to 2004, the selling situation showed a wide difference with coffee. Switzerland is the biggest bananas-consuming country in the five, 15 in 1999 and 47 in 2004, which are over the total amount of other countries in both years. Linking Words
In addition
, the growths in Linking Words
UK
and Belgium are similar, 1 to 5.5 and 0.6 to 4 respectively. Correct article usage
the UK
Conversely
, both Sweden’s and Denmark’s sales Linking Words
experience
a 50%-drop from 1.8 and 2.
In the 5 years, the trading volume of two agricultural products all increased. And it is worth Wrong verb form
experienced
to mention
that the residents from Change the verb form
mentioning
UK
and Sweden purchased more Correct article usage
the UK
these
goods than others.Change preposition
of these
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