Write a letter to the Airline that you have lost bag in the plane and requesting to find the bag?
I am writing with regard to the American Airline I travelled from
Newyork
to Paris Correct your spelling
New York
on
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apply
last
Tuesday.
There is major
Correct article usage
a major
issues
which I addressing Fix the agreement mistake
issue
you
my Change preposition
with you
bag
has been
lost on 21st of September and the day was Tuesday . I was travelling from Wrong verb form
was
Newyork
to Paris on the American Correct your spelling
New York
Airline
and the flight number is AA 227689. I was so tired and I didn't remember I carried out my Fix the agreement mistake
Airlines
bag
. When I went to
home Remove the preposition
apply
then
I reliased
that I Correct your spelling
realised
have
lost my Wrong verb form
had
bag
.
The specification of my bag
it
has Add a missing verb
is it
pink
Add an article
a pink
color
with 2 back side stripes and a small black zip on the front left side.
It has my personal documents in Change the spelling
colour
their
Correct your spelling
there
specially
my identity card and my office keys. I remember that when Replace the word
especially
the
I was leaving the plane I did not carry out my Correct article usage
apply
bag
and I was forget
Change the verb form
forgot
on
the cabin
I am requesting you to please find my Change preposition
in
bag
as soon as possible. Then
I
will be easier to travel Correct pronoun usage
it
in
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to
other country
.
I look forward to hearing from you as soon as have received my letter.
Yours Faithfully,
Rubina ArshadChange the wording
another country
other countries
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coherence cohesion
Improve the logical organization of your letter by providing a clear introduction, body paragraphs, and conclusion.
coherence cohesion
Use an appropriate greeting and closing for a formal letter.
coherence cohesion
Each paragraph should focus on a single idea or topic. Avoid merging multiple ideas into one paragraph.
task achievement
Ensure that you provide enough information about your lost bag, such as the date, flight number, and description, to help the airline find it.
task achievement
Use a more formal and polite tone throughout the letter.
The Greeting
Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.
Always start an informal letter in the ways:
- Dear + name
- Hi / Hello + name
‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.
For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:
- Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
- Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.
