The given diagram illustrates the making process of tea leaves that are created into 5 different tea categories.

The diagram describes how to produce

tea

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leaves into five types of

tea

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, there are six steps that

begins

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from plucking the

tea

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leaves after they are grown enough until the drying stage using

oven

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the oven

an oven

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Firstly

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tea

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leaves must go through the process of growth before they are ready to be picked out.

Then

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the plucked

tea

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leaves experience the wilting (withering) process, in which some of the next additional stages mark the differences

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the end product.

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, if the withered ones are directly put into the oven, they will become a white

tea

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. The withered

tea

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leaves are rolled before drying them to make oolong

tea

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and

large leaf

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large-leaf

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black

tea

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However

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, these wilted leaves could generate green

tea

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as well if we steam them before the rolling phase. Another differentiation can

also

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be found in making

small leaf

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small-leaf

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black

tea

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, where the wilted

tea

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leaves are crushed and fully fermented before we put them into the oven.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words tea with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

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3 paragraphs

162 words

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