The given diagram illustrates the making process of tea leaves that are created into 5 different tea categories.
The diagram describes how to produce
tea
leaves into five types of tea
. Overall
, there are six steps that begins
from plucking the Change the verb form
begin
tea
leaves after they are grown enough until the drying stage using oven
.
Add an article
the oven
an oven
Firstly
, tea
leaves must go through the process of growth before they are ready to be picked out. Then
the plucked tea
leaves experience the wilting (withering) process, in which some of the next additional stages mark the differences of
the end product. Change preposition
in
For example
, if the withered ones are directly put into the oven, they will become a white tea
.
The withered tea
leaves are rolled before drying them to make oolong tea
and large leaf
black Add a hyphen
large-leaf
tea
. However
, these wilted leaves could generate green tea
as well if we steam them before the rolling phase. Another differentiation can also
be found in making small leaf
black Add a hyphen
small-leaf
tea
, where the wilted tea
leaves are crushed and fully fermented before we put them into the oven.Submitted by shanniania on
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