The given diagram illustrates the making process of tea leaves that are created into 5 different tea categories.

The given diagram illustrates the making process of tea leaves that are created into 5 different tea categories.
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The diagram describes how to produce
tea
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leaves into five types of
tea
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.
Overall
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, there are six steps that
begins
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from plucking the
tea
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leaves after they are grown enough until the drying stage using
oven
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the oven
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.
Firstly
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,
tea
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leaves must go through the process of growth before they are ready to be picked out.
Then
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the plucked
tea
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leaves experience the wilting (withering) process, in which some of the next additional stages mark the differences
of
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the end product.
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, if the withered ones are directly put into the oven, they will become a white
tea
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. The withered
tea
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leaves are rolled before drying them to make oolong
tea
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and
large leaf
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large-leaf
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black
tea
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.
However
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, these wilted leaves could generate green
tea
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as well if we steam them before the rolling phase. Another differentiation can
also
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be found in making
small leaf
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small-leaf
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black
tea
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, where the wilted
tea
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leaves are crushed and fully fermented before we put them into the oven.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words tea with synonyms.
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