Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Languages
are the main source
to
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communicate
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with each other.
Languages
have the identity to speak with different
countries
. Some
people
feel that if there
are
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few
languages
in the
world
life would be easier but
it's
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some extent because
languages
have the identification pertains to which region you
belongs
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.
However
, the question is
that
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life will be easier if fewer
languages
remain in the
world
?
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It's widely felt that speaking
languages
are different in the
world
. Many
countries
have numerous
languages
in their own region. Diversity of the language
create
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problems for communication gap in other areas of the
world
.
Such
as fewer communication barriers and
increase
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in global tourism so it would be minimised
languages
. Human history
languages
have extinct throughout the migration. Globally
people
migrate to foreign
countries
for
study
or work but it creates
barrier
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barriers
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because
people
cannot understand the accent of
particular
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a particular
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area. Many students feel uncomfortable
to pursue
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their
study
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studies
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.
For example
, one of my
classmate
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classmates
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had
opportunity
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the opportunity
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to
study
abroad so she opted
the
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course enrollment, when
class
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the class
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fellow arrived he
had
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faced many issues in understanding the accent of the lectures and
study
material,
then
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and then
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she left to
the studying
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study
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. So
this
language
bar
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barrier
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can be resolved worldly for the sake of foreign
people
. Tourists have
travel
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travelled
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to various parts of the
world
and they know the language hurdles. Several tourists
planned
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plan
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for travelling
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to Europe
countries
but the diversity of the
languages
are
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quiet
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quite
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difficult for travellers.
For instance
, linguistics differences, unfamiliar writing systems and lack of cultural awareness. Tourists have avoided
to travel
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such
countries
which directly
effected to
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the
economic
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economy
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of the country. These gaps could be removed with
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reduction of
languages
.
To sum up
,
languages
have
own
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their own
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importance in the entire
world
.
People
are not familiar with divergent
of
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languages
.
This
establish
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establishes
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the obstacles of
communication
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the communication
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process so it should be
minimum
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a minimum
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the
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speaking
languages
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Linguistic diversity
  • Cultural heritage
  • Language extinction
  • Communication barrier
  • Linguistic imperialism
  • Endangered languages
  • Language revitalization
  • Monolingual
  • Multilingual
  • Language preservation
  • Homogenization
  • Language policy
  • Cultural assimilation
  • Intangible heritage
  • Indigenous languages
  • Globalization
  • Dialects
  • Localization
  • Language documentation
  • Digital archiving
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