The increasing availability of low-cost airlines now lets people travel around the world. Some feel this is a positive development while others think it is negative overall.

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Nowadays, the

world

is more interconnected

due to

globalization.

This

allow

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people

to have more opportunities that they didn't have before

such

traveling

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around the

world

thanks to the low-cost airlines.

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people

argue that

this

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positive change but others think that it has a negative impact too. Even though I agree with both sides, I think the disadvantages are more relevant in the situation we are currently going through.

Firstly

, the fact that airlines are cheaper now than they were many years ago can allow

people

to have the experience of

traveling

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which can lead to other situations like the

increase

of tourism

for example

. Many countries'

economy

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in the

world

depend on tourism because

this

has an impact

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the GDP, proof of

this

is Mexico, due

the

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increase

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traveling

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, more

people

can know new places and perhaps they want to stay there to study or have a job. These are some of the positive impacts that

traveling

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can have

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into

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society

and the

world

in general. The more traveling exists, the better it is for social and

economy

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factors of the countries.

However

traveling

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can

also

lead to some very worrying consequences that we're currently leading with as a

society

such

as global warmth. Even though

goverments

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governments

government

can not

due

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too much to solve

this

problem, we can make a change as a

society

Low-cost

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in general sometimes makes us fall

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consumerism which is bad for the

enviroment

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environment

, in

this

case with airplanes we contaminate a lot.

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, in

the

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recent

years

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there has been a significant

increase

in air traffic because more

people

want to travel. Even though traveling can be good for

society

and

economy

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, it can have very important negative impacts too. Only if airlines should be aware of

this

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and

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do everything to develop technologies that don't damage the

enviroment

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environment

then

the

increase

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low-cost

traveling

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travelling

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would only be beneficial for the

world

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10Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
26Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

327 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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Affordability
Global mobility
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Environmental impact
Economic benefits
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The increasing availability of low-cost airlines now lets people travel around the world. Some feel this is a positive development while others think it is negative overall.

Include an introduction and conclusion

Students should pay their full cost for their own study, because university education benefits individuals rather than society. To what extent you agree or disagree?

Some people think it would be a good idea for schools to teach every yong person how to be a good parent Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Describe the skills a person needs to be a good parent

the growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing.

Countries with long working days are more successful economically, but there are some negative social consequences. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Modern professional women confront a difficulty that men don’t generally face: the struggle to balance the pressures of work and home. In your opinion, how can this difficulty best be ? Give reasons for your answer and include examples from your own knowledge or experiences.