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The increasing availability of low-cost airlines now lets people travel around the world. Some feel this is a positive development while others think it is negative overall.

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Nowadays, the
world
 is more interconnected
due to
 globalization.
This
allow
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people
 to have more opportunities that they didn't have before
such
 as
traveling
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 around the
world
 thanks to the low-cost airlines.
As a result
,
people
 argue that
this
a
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positive change but others think that it has a negative impact too. Even though I agree with both sides, I think the disadvantages are more relevant in the situation we are currently going through. 
Firstly
, the fact that airlines are cheaper now than they were many years ago can allow
people
 to have the experience of
traveling
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 which can lead to other situations like the
increase
 of tourism
for example
. Many countries'
economy
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economies
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 in the
world
 depend on tourism because
this
 has an impact
in
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 the GDP, proof of
this
 is Mexico, due
the
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increase
of
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traveling
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, more
people
 can know new places and perhaps they want to stay there to study or have a job. These are some of the positive impacts that
traveling
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 can have
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into
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society
 and the
world
 in general. The more traveling exists, the better it is for social and
economy
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 factors of the countries. 
However
,
traveling
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 can
also
 lead to some very worrying consequences that we're currently leading with as a
society
such
 as global warmth. Even though
goverments
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governments
government
 can not
due
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do
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 too much to solve
this
 problem, we can make a change as a
society
.
Low-cost
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 in general sometimes makes us fall
in
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 consumerism which is bad for the
enviroment
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environment
, in
this
 case with airplanes we contaminate a lot.
For instance
, in
the
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recent
years
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 there has been a significant
increase
 in air traffic because more
people
 want to travel.  Even though traveling can be good for
society
 and
economy
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, it can have very important negative impacts too. Only if airlines should be aware of
this
an
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and
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 do everything to develop technologies that don't damage the
enviroment
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environment
then
 the
increase
of
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 low-cost
traveling
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 would only be beneficial for the
world
.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Accessibility
  • Affordability
  • Global mobility
  • Convenience
  • Environmental impact
  • Economic benefits
  • Cultural exchange
  • Enhanced connectivity
  • Drawbacks
  • Sustainable travel
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