You live near a recreation ground. A local school often brings pupils to the recreation ground to do sports, such as football and cricket, but recently this has caused some problems. Write a letter to the head of the school. In your letter: explain why you enjoy living by the recreation ground describe the recent problems at the recreation ground say what you think the school should do
Dear Sir or Madam,
This
is Urvashi Bhavsar. I am writing this
letter in regard to complain about your student's behaviour at recreation park
. I have been living in Tamarack
neighborhood for 5 years and my house is located just near the recreation Correct article usage
the Tamarack
park
. My husband and I like to spend Correct article usage
the evening
evening
Fix the agreement mistake
evenings
times
in Fix the agreement mistake
time
park
and my children Add an article
the park
are
Unnecessary verb
apply
also
enjoy their palytime
there. Here, I would like you to share some concerns related to your Correct your spelling
playtime
students
. This
is a
great that a local school inspire Change the article
apply
their
Correct pronoun usage
its
student's
to play Change the noun form
students
student
outdoors
sports. Change the word
outdoor
However
, sometimes school
take Fix the agreement mistake
schools
students
in evening
time to practice for football and cricket matches. Add an article
the evening
Thus
, this
causes major issues for a
evening Correct article usage
apply
walker
and children. There Fix the agreement mistake
walkers
had
been many accidents and injuries Wrong verb form
have
happen
to senior people and young kids Wrong verb form
happening
due to
hitting
by a ball. Wrong verb form
being hit
Moreover
, those students
occupied whole
ground and Add an article
the whole
make
noises. Wrong verb form
made
In addition
, some students
throw garbage on ground
Add an article
the ground
instead
of garbage bin
and leave Fix the agreement mistake
bins
park
dirty and filthy. To combat Correct article usage
the park
this
situation, I would like you to address this problems
Change the determiner
this problem
these problems
to
your Change preposition
with
students
and staff. I would like you
to request Correct pronoun usage
apply
you
if possible Correct pronoun usage
apply
students
can come to practice in after time rather than evening
that would be great for everyone. Add an article
an evening
Lastly
, please advise tell
them not to make Verb problem
apply
noises
and Fix the agreement mistake
noise
keep
Fix the infinitive
to keep
environment
clean at the recreation Add an article
the environment
park
. I am looking forward to your positive response. If you have any questions please let me know. Regards, UrvashiSubmitted by bhavsar.urvashi on
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task achievement
Clearly address all aspects of the task prompt in a more organized manner.
task achievement
Use a more formal and polite tone throughout the letter.
coherence cohesion
Organize your ideas into paragraphs to improve coherence and readability.
lexical resource
Use a wide range of vocabulary to enhance your writing.
grammatical range and accuracy
Focus on using correct grammar and sentence structures.
Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.