The pie chart shows the reasons why the young people don't do sport. write at least 150 words.
Young people tend to engage in less physical activity as illustrated vividly by several factors in the pie chart. The main reason is the lack of time limits to their opportunity to do sports, accounting for 40%.
Beside
, the interest and desire Replace the word
Besides
for participating
in sporting activities of the motivation plays a crucial role Change preposition
to participate
to urge
Change preposition
in urging
the
people to take part in certain physical activities, in Correct article usage
apply
this
case, a third of young people do not enjoy sport
. The proportions of individuals preferring to Fix the agreement mistake
sports
other
things and remaining those Add a missing verb
do other
aren't
fit to do sports are accounted sequentially for 12% and 10%. Correct pronoun usage
who aren't
Finally
, the final reason occupies
the lowest rate (at 5%) Correct pronoun usage
that occupies
that
it's too expensive.Add a missing verb
is that
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