The graph shows the increase in population of three counties Colunbia, Yamhill and Washington in the U.S. state of Oregon, between 1940 and 2000. These three lines experienced an upward tendency, where the highest population was recorded in Washington.
The graph shows the increase in remarkable increase in the
population
of Add an article
the population
three
counties Colunbia
, Correct your spelling
Columbia
Yamhill
and Washington
in the U.S. state of Oregon, between 1940 and 2000. These three
lines experienced an upward tendency, where the highest population
was recorded in Washington
.
In 1940, Columbia
had the lowest population
of the three
counties, at around 25,000. This
compared with about seventy five
Add a hyphen
seventy-five
thousand
in Washington
. Between 1940 and 1970 population
of Yamhill
and Columbia
rosed gradually. Moreover
, there had beenAdd an article
a
numbers
of people in Fix the agreement mistake
number
Yamhill
in that period. However
, in the next three
decades population
of Correct article usage
the population
Washington
climbed sharply and rised
from Correct your spelling
raised
rise
rose
125.000
to over 240 Correct your spelling
125,000
thousand
in 2000.
Further more
, there Correct your spelling
Furthermore
had been
a slight difference between Wrong verb form
was
Columbia
and Yamhill
in 1940, however
after 60 years Yamhill
had around ninety thousand
people. In comparison, Columbia
lagged behind by 14thousand, in 2000,so Columbia
's population
had at approximately 76.000.Submitted by dnm.best on
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