Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world. Some people think that this cannot be changed, while others believe actions can be taken to bring bout a change. Discuss both view and give your own opinion.

Human beings

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lots of disturbance to the

environment

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all over the globe including different kinds of pollution. These impacts not only harmed the survival of

plants

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and

animals

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, it is

also

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crucial for the living of human in the future.

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, measures should be implemented to tackle

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the existing environmental problems. The rapid economic

development

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all over the

world

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brought many harmful impacts

to

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the

environment

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. Controversies

rose

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arose

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whether

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about whether

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the current polluted

environment

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could be improved by

human

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. For people

being

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pessimistic

on

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about

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the existing situation,

it

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is understandable. Especially for the developing

countries

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, they are now focusing on

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industrial

development

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as their main economic pillar. Undoubtedly, factories producing different goods brought massive pollution to the

environment

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.

Greenhouse

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gases

such

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as carbon dioxide and methane are common in

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factory production. The surge in the amount of atmospheric

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gases intensified the

greenhouse

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effect, as a

reuslt

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result

, speeding up global warming. Global warming led to increasing sea

level

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and the

losing

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of

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animals

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animals'

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habitats. Developing

countries

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with low technological level comparatively couldn't easily give up industrial

development

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as every country in the

world

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are competing for the economy to gain

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international presence. It is difficult for them to

sacrfice

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sacrifice

their economic

development

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to protect the

environment

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.

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, other than industrial

development

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, urbanization around the

world

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is currently

in

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at

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an unprecedented rate. The rise in the

world

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's population increased the land demand for

accomodation

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accommodation

. With limited flat land in some cities, reclamation and

developing

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development

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the

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country parks became an option for the governments to increase land supply.

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, reclamation

causest

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causes

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irreversible damage to

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marine

lives

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life

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, poisoning

sea water

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seawater

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and increasing ocean turbidity. Developing country parks, which were originally the relatively safer place for

animals

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to escape to would have their habitat directly destroyed. Deforestation and reclaiming rivers

kills

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plants

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and

animals

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. The ecosystem breaks down immediately. Some people think it is possible to adopt measures to tackle

with

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the aforementioned harms made to the

environment

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. In the contemporary society, sustainable

development

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is upheld. Different

countries

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no matter rich or poor began to cooperate in resolving the environmental crises. New technology in industrial production is adopted. Polluted water is cleaned before

dumping

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being dumped

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into the ocean

while

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pollutants

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pollutant

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filters

is

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installed in factories.

New

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reclamation method is used to minimize the effect brings to the ocean.

Countries

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over the

world

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came together to sign different agreements

in

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on

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greenhouse

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gases

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emissions and pollution control to limit the impact

to

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on

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the

environment

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.

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, for decades,

human

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humans

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begins

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kept making negative impacts

to

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on

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the

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plants

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and

animals

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while

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we are now finding

the

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way

out

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to fix the problem. It is hoped that the introduction of new technology and phasing out polluting production

would

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be the future trend of the

world

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.

Human

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cannot live without the

disapperance

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disappearance

of

plants

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and

animals

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.

Ecosystem

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Ecosystems

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should be sustained for the continuity of both the

environment

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and

human

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humans

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.