Children nowadays spend a great deal of time on e-learning. However, television or computers cannot replace the book as learning tool, which is why children are less well educated today. To what extend to you agree with this statement.

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contemporary era, the paramount learning
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are television and computers become popular among adolescents
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these children are lagging behind
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their counterparts who utilize
books
as their learning tools. I
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with
this
statement, let us delve
further
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paragraphs to clear the vision. To advent, in the pandemic phase
e-
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learning
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e-learning
prove
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as
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indispensable
tool
in education,
besides
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applications
has
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limited
knowledge
thereby students have not comprehended their subject clearly.
Furthermore
, reading
books
balance
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the equilibrium of intellect in the upbringing
child
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of children
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whereby they become
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in both
knowledge
of their subject and life. It is evident by a glaring example
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depicts that 90% of successful
person
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in the world adhere
themselves
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with
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books
. E-learning is
crucial
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precipitate of
being
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laziness among children.
While
,
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they remains
front
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of
display
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of their computer , tend
them
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to become
a
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couch potato. Learning tools of application engross the
all
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attention of students which have elevated the mental and physical issues among them.
Books
have
written
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with
plethora
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of
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and investigations
thus
learners
occur
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ample
of
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satiable
knowledge
.
Besides
, experts have attributed the rising rate of
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failing in their secondary classes in the
last
five years to e-learning methods.
Therefore
,
electronics
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displays cannot replace
books
as a learning
tool
as these mediums have only limited application to teach new things.
To conclude
, I reckon that,
books
are conspicuous
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as compared to e-learning.
To
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addition, parents should devote their attention and stimulate their children to read
books
instead
of
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acquiring
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knowledge
from
e- learning
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e-learning
tools.
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