The graph gives information about the percentage of the population of four different Asian countries living in cities between 1970 and 2020, with additional predictions for 2030 and 2040.
The graph provides
informations
about the proportion of the population of four countries in Asia from 1970 until 2020, and extra future predictions in 20 upcoming years.
In general, there are three increasing trends and one slight fluctuating trend displayed in one diagram describing the Change the wording
information
pieces of information
percentations
of people living in cities. In the beginning, the highest Correct your spelling
perceptions
presentations
populations
was in Fix the agreement mistake
population
Philippines
, and the lowest Correct article usage
the Philippines
is
in Wrong verb form
was
Indonesia
. However
, in the future, Malaysia's populations
will Fix the agreement mistake
population
outweighed
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outweigh
other
three countries Correct article usage
the other
while
Indonesia
will ended
up in Change the verb form
end
be ended
the
second place.
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apply
To begin
, Change preposition
in In1970
In1970
, Correct your spelling
in 1970
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the Phillipines
Phillipines
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Philippines
populations
who Fix the agreement mistake
population
live
in the city Wrong verb form
lived
was
the largest with just above 30% of Correct subject-verb agreement
were
total
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the total
populations
in Fix the agreement mistake
population
this
country. Followed by Malaysia, with around 29% of its total populations
. Fix the agreement mistake
population
Furthemore
, Correct your spelling
Furthermore
Indonesia
started around 2-3% lower than Thailand with approximately 18% of total
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the total
populations
. After 1990, Fix the agreement mistake
population
Philippines
experienced a decent trend until 2010, and Correct article usage
the Philippines
then
started to rise again. Despite the falling of Philipinnes populations
, other
three countries performed increasing trends. Correct article usage
the other
However
, Thailand showed just a slight climb.
Moreover
, in the future, Malaysia is predicted will be in the first place in number
of Change the article
a number
the number
populations
with almost 85% of its total populations
. Fix the agreement mistake
population
Following
this
, Indonesia
is estimated with
just above 60% of Change preposition
that
total
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the total
populations
will be living in urban Fix the agreement mistake
population
place
in 2040. Fix the agreement mistake
places
In addition
, Philippones
is predicted with 3-5% higher than Thailand with just around 53% of its total population in 2040.Correct your spelling
Philippines
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