In some countries, the government pays for health care. In others, the individual must pay for their own health care. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of each system.

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economist but

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citizens who have knowledge in the basis of economics

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also

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whether

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welfare should be provided for everyone or not. From my perspective, I strongly

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agree with

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statement.

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, social security is supposed to be the basic welfare

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it is the appropriate way to improve our economy and environment. To illustrate

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, individuals who are living in uncomfortable circumstances have the potential to

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receive treatment

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in a top-ranked hospital

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to not only reducing the cost of treatment but ones having an opportunity to spend their money to improve their wealth or knowledge.

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, some countries, Thailand

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, which use

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solution called the 30 bath project, possible to improve the healthcare infrastructure

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Thailand’s GDP at that time

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to grow higher than ever before.

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, despite the benefits above, it has various gigantic drawbacks that the government is supposed to be concerned about significantly.

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era, most countries absolutely become an ageing society.

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reason, the administration operating

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solution must intensively worry about the number of elderly people increasing in the foreseeable future,

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, policymakers will spend a huge amount of their financial resources on the population in need,

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, their budget is not adequately causing either the deficit budget or their credit rating will be downgraded by a credit rating agency, namely the moody and standard&poor.

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,

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policy is a moral hazard, as people who have

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welfare

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not sufficiently taken care of themselves

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society

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economic

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in the future.

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,

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method is the best way

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in the case that

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these countries did not become

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state.

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, involvers must be concerned in terms of

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problem and their financial resources.