The pie chart shows the amount of money that a children's charity located in the USA spent and received in one year, 2016. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie chart shows the amount of money that a children's charity located in the USA spent and received in one year, 2016.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie chart illustrates the distribution of
sources
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received and spent by children’s
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charity
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in the USA in 2016.
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, the amount of
money
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received exceeded the amount spent,
although
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, most of the donations came in non-monetary form. The
charity
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received monetary help from various different
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. The biggest contribution was community based with over ten per cent followed by
money
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received from the program (2.2%). Other
sources
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such
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as investments, grants and other factors, indicated low percentages of under 0.5%, respectively.
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all these together made all the
money
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received by the
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, donated food,
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, took nearly 90% of all the
sources
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received. Most noticeably, the
charity
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spent nearly all the
money
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it received in the period given. The total amount of income was $53,561,580, which was just enough to cover the expenditures of $52,224,896.
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part of the
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was spent on program services, nearly 96%. The rest of the expenditures were divided by management and general with slightly higher amounts spent on fundraising.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sources, charity, money with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "amount" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 3 times.
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