The pie chart shows the amount of money that a children's charity located in the USA spent and received in one year, 2016. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie chart shows the amount of money that a children's charity located in the USA spent and received in one year, 2016.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart illustrates the distribution of
sources
received and spent by children’s
charity
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charities
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in the USA in 2016.
Overall
, the amount of
money
received exceeded the amount spent,
although
, most of the donations came in non-monetary form. The
charity
received monetary help from various different
sources
. The biggest contribution was community based with over ten per cent followed by
money
received from the program (2.2%). Other
sources
such
as investments, grants and other factors, indicated low percentages of under 0.5%, respectively.
While
all these together made all the
money
received by the
charity
, donated food,
however
, took nearly 90% of all the
sources
received. Most noticeably, the
charity
spent nearly all the
money
it received in the period given. The total amount of income was $53,561,580, which was just enough to cover the expenditures of $52,224,896.
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part of the
money
was spent on program services, nearly 96%. The rest of the expenditures were divided by management and general with slightly higher amounts spent on fundraising.
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