The diagrams below show the results of a survey from Taiwan explaining how students, wanting to study overseas, chose a university from 1998-2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparision where relevant.
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The given table compares a survey conducted in Taiwan on how female and male students are willing to pursue education abroad in eight different categories over two decades between 1998 and 2008.
Overall
, ranking, cost
of tuition, and cost
of accommodation gave the highest scores in both years. Meanwhile, the quality of teachers and modern teaching methods is the lowest. Moreover
, the ratings of tuition fee
and location rose throughout the given period.
In 1998, people considered, in ranking, the Fix the agreement mistake
fees
cost
of tuition and the cost
of accommodation the highest, between 88% and 100%. In contrast
, the quality of tutors was rated by women and men at only 5% and 13%, respectively. Similarly
, modern teaching techniques rate between 5% and 8%.
Turning to 2008, the most significant changes were seen in the ranking. It decreased significantly in women by 10%, from 100% to 90%. Likewise
, in men, it slightly decreased to 95%. Although
facilities in teaching, teacher’s
quality, and accommodation Change noun form
teacher
fee
were dropped from the male’s perspectives to 42%, 6%, and 86%, respectively, women rated higher than that in the previous year by 2–4%. Fix the agreement mistake
fees
Additionally
, both fellows and girls were more likely to consider student loans and locality at the end
of the year by 9% and 14%, subsequently
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respectively
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words cost with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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