The bar chart shows the scores of teams A, B and C over four different seasons. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart shows the scores of teams A, B and C over four different seasons.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph illustrates the
amount
of
points
earned by three
teams
in four seasons between 2002 to 2005.
Overall
, all the
teams
experienced fluctuation in terms of
points
,
however
,
Team
B indicated significant dominance over the
period
. At the start of the given
period
,
team
B had
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dramatical
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dramatic
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difference in
points
compared to
the
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Team
A and
Team
C, surpassing them with approximately 80
points
, respectively. In the following years,
nevertheless
,
this
difference was smaller.
Furthermore
, in the next two years,
team
B’s scored
points
decreased by
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doubling
the
amount
,
however
, slightly increasing again
at the end
of the
period
up to 55. In terms of other
teams
, their results were noticeably lower.
Team
C had double the
amount
of
points
that
team
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A had at the
beggining
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beginning
(5 and 10),
although
in 2005, the situation was the opposite (8 and 5). Both
teams
got higher scores towards the middle of the
period
,
team
C reaching a peak in 2003 before falling into decline.
Similarly
,
team
A reached a peak a year later, getting almost
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amount
points
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as the leader of all
teams
,
team
B, with 35
points
, respectively. After that, numbers fell into decline.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Vocabulary: Replace the words amount, points, teams, team, period with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "difference" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 2 times.
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