The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, make comparisons where relevant.
The given line graph gives information about the rate of closed and recently opened
shops
for
a country from 2011 to 2018.
Change preposition
in
Overall
, there is a downward trend of shops
for both closures and openings. The number
of closed and opened shops
reached about same
point Change the article
the same
at
2014. Change preposition
in
Then
the rate of new shops
decreased gradually between 2014 and 2018, whereas
closed shops
number
started to increase dramatically from 2015 to 2018.
With more details, the number
of closed and opened shops
decreased from 2011 to 2012. They both suddenly increased until 2014. There was a dramatic decrease for
the Change preposition
in
number
of shop clousures
from 2014 to 2015. Closed Correct your spelling
closures
shops
have
experienced something Unnecessary verb
apply
badly
from 2015 to 2016, Change the word
bad
however
the rate of shop openings Add a comma
however,
did
not affected too much from something and went on a decrease.Verb problem
was
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