The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, make comparisons where relevant.

The given line graph gives information about the rate of closed and recently opened

shops

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a country from 2011 to 2018.

Overall

, there is a downward trend of

shops

for both closures and openings. The

number

of closed and opened

shops

reached about

same

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the same

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point

at

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2014.

Then

the rate of new

shops

decreased gradually between 2014 and 2018,

whereas

closed

shops

number

started to increase dramatically from 2015 to 2018. With more details, the

number

of closed and opened

shops

decreased from 2011 to 2012. They both suddenly increased until 2014. There was a dramatic decrease

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in

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the

number

of shop

clousures

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closures

from 2014 to 2015. Closed

shops

have

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apply

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experienced something

badly

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from 2015 to 2016,

however

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however,

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the rate of shop openings

did

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not affected too much from something and went on a decrease.