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The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The provided process diagram represents the process of how used
plastic
 bottles
recycled
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are recycled
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 into new bottles.
Overall
, it can be seen that there are nine stages in
this
 cyclical process, which consists of collecting, sorting, compressing, crushing, palletizing and producing end products.
To begin
 with,
the first step is
 to collect the reused bottles and
trasport
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transport
it
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them
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in
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to
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 the recycling centre. After that, workers sort out the good
one
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ones
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 and the bad
one
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ones
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, which
followed
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is followed
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 by compressing all plastics into blocks. Next step,
plastic
 blocks
put
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 in for crushing in the machine and
then
 it goes for washing. Once the washing is done, a machine
produce
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plastic
 pellets, which
then
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are then
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 heated up to form
as
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apply
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raw material. The raw material used for producing new
plastic
 products
such
 as
bottle
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bottles
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,
pencil
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pencils
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,
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and bag
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bag
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bags
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. People use these
producta
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products
 and put the used products into recycle
bin
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bins
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 and these again get collected for
recycle
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recycling
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.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words plastic with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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