The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
The provided process diagram represents the process of how used
plastic
Use synonyms
bottles
recycled
Add a missing verb
are recycled
show examples
into new bottles.
Overall
Linking Words
, it can be seen that there are nine stages in
this
Linking Words
cyclical process, which consists of collecting, sorting, compressing, crushing, palletizing and producing end products.
To begin
Linking Words
with,
the first step is
Linking Words
to collect the reused bottles and
trasport
Correct your spelling
transport
it
Correct pronoun usage
them
show examples
in
Change preposition
to
show examples
the recycling centre. After that, workers sort out the good
one
Correct pronoun usage
ones
show examples
and the bad
one
Correct pronoun usage
ones
show examples
, which
followed
Add a missing verb
is followed
show examples
by compressing all plastics into blocks. Next step,
plastic
Use synonyms
blocks
put
Add a missing verb
are put
show examples
in for crushing in the machine and
then
Linking Words
it goes for washing. Once the washing is done, a machine
produce
Change the verb form
produces
show examples
plastic
Use synonyms
pellets, which
Linking Words
then
Add a missing verb
are then
show examples
heated up to form
as
Change preposition
apply
show examples
raw material. The raw material used for producing new
plastic
Use synonyms
products
such
Linking Words
as
bottle
Fix the agreement mistake
bottles
show examples
,
pencil
Fix the agreement mistake
pencils
show examples
,
Correct word choice
and bag
show examples
bag
Fix the agreement mistake
bags
show examples
. People use these
producta
Correct your spelling
products
and put the used products into recycle
bin
Fix the agreement mistake
bins
show examples
and these again get collected for
recycle
Change the verb form
recycling
show examples
.
Submitted by sayelacu2011 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words plastic with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Recycling process
  • Disposal
  • Collection
  • Sorting
  • Cleaning
  • Contaminants
  • Recycling center
  • Plastic flakes
  • Melting
  • Re-shaping
  • Raw materials
  • Transformation
  • Repurposing
  • End products
  • Variety
  • Sustainability
What to do next:
Look at other essays: