There is a big influence of peer group on children's behaviour. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages? What can be done about it?

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learned
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is a common phrase that we get to hear from kids and teenagers as
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friend
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circle plays a vital role in children's
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. Sometimes that
behaviour
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may surprise parents and make them proud but
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of the time parents
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negatively
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affected. The curious minds of young ones always
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learn what they see and they would want to adopt it quickly.
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means even if
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traits that they are adapting to would negatively
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their
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they would still do that.
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researcher
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questioned university students about their addiction to vape and
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, all of them mentioned they first did that with a
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and
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latter
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it turned into
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.
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, the kind of children a kid is surrounded with would have a major impact on their studies.
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means when a child
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other students not paying much attention to
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their studies
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they tend to
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develop similar
traits which
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their
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behaviour
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and performance. On the other other hand, there are some advantages that should be
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discussed
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, a child will learn about team spirit from their
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circle that helps them
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develop
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competitive
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while
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still maintaining the bond with each other.
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, the more
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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