The graph below shows the reported number of cases of influenza in people over 65 in a certain village in the UK from 1985 to 1995.
The line graph illustrates the number of people who are over 65 years old in a UK village who reported influenza in the period between 1985 and 1995.
Overall
, the number of influenza cases reported among elderly people over 65 experienced an upward trend from the beginning of the period to the end of the period. However
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In 1985, there were 40 cases informed and it rose significantly in 1987 to 55 numbers. However
, patients suddenly dropped to approximately 47 in 1988 and continuously increased up to 75 which was the highest cases reported in 1991.Submitted by nishadi.kaluarachchi on
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