In some countries, more young adults continue to live with their parents even after they have completed education and found jobs. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages? Write at least 250 words.
In some countries, there has been and continues to be a trend among adults who have graduated and secured employment still living with their
parents
. There are both advantages and disadvantages to this
situation. However
, personally
the drawbacks are more than the benefits.
On the one hand, after graduation and no stable job, living with Add a comma
personally,
parents
have
many benefits. Correct subject-verb agreement
has
First,
parents
who have readily available finance of help and support can help save a
amount of money Change the article
an
such
as rent and food. Beside
, they can easily take care of their Replace the word
Besides
parents
and vice versa, their parents
can also
look after them when they catch the illness. Morever
, living Correct your spelling
Moreover
toghether
in the house can make family relationships even more intimate, they can understand each other better and they can Correct your spelling
together
also
be a strong spiritual support for us when we encounter difficulties. Talking regularly with older people
can help you gain more knowledge, experience and life skill
that can help your career and life.
Fix the agreement mistake
skills
On the other hand
, the drawbacks of adults still living with parents
overshadow its benefits. First,
having multiple generations living toghether
cause disagreements. Correct your spelling
together
For example
, In Asia, parents
often have the notion that adults are usually “right” and their child should be the one to apologize even if the parents
are in the wrong. And people
in the older generation attach great importance to marriage, often urging their children to get married. That is
also
one of the reasons why families quarrel. Secondly
, people
who stay with parents
are easy to live dependently on, because they don't need to pay attention to housework or food. Correct pronoun usage
their parents
For instance
, When it comes time to move, they will have great difficulty managing their finances and spending. Not only that, living with parents
will limit private space and be constrained by rules set by parents
such
as not wearing skirts above the thighs or not going out past 10 p.m
and It can Correct your spelling
p.m.
also
limit our creativity.
In conclusion, although
living with parents
has both good and bad sides, I think young people
will have some difficulty making decisions.Submitted by trancaomaitrang on
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