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The graph shows the differencies in wheat export over the three areas

The graph shows the differencies in wheat export over the three areas
#differencies #wheat #export #three #areas
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The line graph illustrates the
wheat
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 exports in three zones, namely
Australia
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,
Canada
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, and European countries, from 1985 to 1990.
Overall
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, the exported
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 quantity in Europe climbed marginally,
whereas
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 in
Australia
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 and
Canada
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, overseas traded
wheat
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 declined slightly and remained constant throughout the period. In 1985,
wheat
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 transited in
Canada
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 at around just below 20
million
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tonnes
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 was fractionally more than that of the European Union and
Australia
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, which accounted for approximately 17 and 15
million
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tonnes
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.
Afterward
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, the figure for
Canada
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, after a gentle fall, surged and dropped to 25 and 15
million
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tonnes
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 in 1988 and 1989,
then
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finally
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 increased insignificantly by around 5
million
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tonnes
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 and touched the same numbers as many as the first year.
On the other hand
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, there was a minimal rise in
Australia
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's exported
wheat
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 before reducing steadily to the bottom of roughly 10
million
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tonnes
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 in the
last
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 year, which was almost half of Europe's and
Canada
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's value.
On the contrary
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, international trade in Europe experienced a slight reduction
then
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 grew gradually and peaked at just above 20
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tonnes
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last
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 year.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words wheat, australia, canada, million, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • export
  • wheat
  • trade
  • produce
  • agricultural commodity
  • volume
  • metric tonnes
  • economic impact
  • fluctuation
  • trend
  • domestic market
  • international market
  • export quota
  • trade barriers
  • comparative advantage
  • seasonal variation
  • supply chain
  • harvest
  • yield
  • competition
  • sustainability
  • forecast
  • logistics
  • subsidy
  • tariff
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