The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2000.
The line graph illustrates the number of tourists from abroad who visited three fascinating places, including the coast, the mountains, and the lakes in a specific European country from 1987 to 2007.
Overall
, the number of lakes and beach visitors fluctuated and climbed significantly, Linking Words
whereas
the figure for mountain tourists rose steadily throughout the period.
In 1987, the coast was the most preferred destination compared to others, with 40000 foreign vacationists, twice and four times more than the Mount and Lakes globetrotter numbers. Since Linking Words
then
, the figure for the mountains experienced a gradual growth of around 15000 to roughly 35000, which was less than others in the Linking Words
last
year.
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On the other hand
, there was a sevenfold surge in the lake’s quantity to around 70000 in 2002, Linking Words
then
it saw a sharp fall to 50000 and ranked second place in the final year. Linking Words
Likewise
, for excursionists who visited after declining marginally to just under 40000 in 1992, the mountains approximately doubled and reached the highest point of just above 70000 in the Linking Words
last
year.Linking Words
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