Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes.

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their personal matters and being decisive, others contend that adopting

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approach will bring about

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society.

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essay will discuss both perspectives and the argument is in favour of the former view.

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with, the concept of allowing

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to act with their entire willingness without targeting them is a devastating

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approach.

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are not mature enough to distinguish what is convenient for them, it is essential to boost them mentally and accompany them at

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.

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some

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always to acquire whatever they like, they adopt deviant behaviour as

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.

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, in turn, gives rise to a

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individual.

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the other hand, it is acknowledged that

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have to reinforce their offspring, offering them to express their

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thoughts,

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their primary needs and

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helping

them to make decisions. Albeit, all that should be with

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constructive approach, which

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on their character positively. It has

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proven that restricting

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and posing them to

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to personality disorders

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as lack of confidence and frequent reluctance.

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who make their own

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and express respectively about matters,

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strengthen their traits.

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,

parents

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have to former constructive

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approaches

for better mental health.

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there is a dominant notion of allowing

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to perform excessively and without targeting them, I believe that

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have to interact positively with them and undertake flexible approaches.