Globalization is creating a world of one culture and destroying national identity. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

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Sentence 4 - Outline sentence

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Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Globalization is creating a world of one culture and destroying national identity. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

Fully explain your ideas

In order to solve traffic problems, governments should tax private car owners heavily and use the money to improve public transportation. What are the advantages and disadvantages of such a solution?

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eople believe that Generation Z (1997-2007) are more dishonest than previous generationsWhat are the reasons for this? Is this a positive or a negative

“Some people view teenage conflict with their parents as a necessary part of growing up, whilst others see it as something negative which should be avoided. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.”