You eat in your college cafeteria everyday lunchtime. However, you think it needs some improvements.

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I hope
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spirit
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. I am writing
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letter with
crucial
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purpose of
complaning
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complaining
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believe
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that
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cafe
very
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well among in
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city cafe.Honestly, The menu needs to be updated. On the òne side first and important thing,I want
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mention
that the ambience in the cafeteria is very good.
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arrangement
very
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comfortable.
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the location
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mentioning as
it
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very easy to reach there.
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, there are some issues with the menu and
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quality
food
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. Most of the
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awesome. But some w dishes very bad. So not washed clean.
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reason
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bowl
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very bad.
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, having given the
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previous
facts you will an immediate action.in forward to hearing from you in the near future.
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