You went to book a hotel recommended to you for a family holiday at the seaside.

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Dear Sir or Madam I

desire

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hope

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this

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letter finds you in radiant health and the best of spirit. I am writing

this

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letter with the crucial purpose of asking about I want to book your resort. So

this

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week is my birthday.

For

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this

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reason, I want to my family and close friends. On the one hand

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the

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first and

important

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most important

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thing ,I hope to get some information so that I can book our stay there. My friend who has recommended

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lodging is for me.Told me a lot of

hottels'

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addresses, but I chose your tavern.I

belief

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believe

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this

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resort is very comfortable and cosy.Because we are a lot of people. My parents,my husband , my

children's

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children

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and me 2 close friends.

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, I am planning to visit during

this

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week. I would

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like to enjoy that famous horse race which takes every year.

Besides

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I would

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like for you to take me to the open street market

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I am there. So I promise to see you soon!

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Sentence 4 - Outline sentence

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Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

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Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

<4

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

169 words

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