The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided diagram illustrates information about the process in order to recycle plastic bottles.
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process consists of 9 stages, beginning with throwing rubbish into the bin and ending with producing end products.
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, people throw their trash into the bins and Linking Words
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garbage trucks come for the purpose of gathering and these trucks are loaded with trash. Linking Words
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, the garbage truck takes the rubbish to the recycling centre, and the garbage is sorted there because of the types. Linking Words
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step is completed, the trash is compressed into blocks and prepared for crushing by particular machines. When crushing is done, crushed plastic material enters the process of washing, and Linking Words
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plastic pellets are produced from clean material. Linking Words
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is followed by heating pellets in order to form raw materials. Linking Words
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as t-shirts, bottles, pencils, and so on.Linking Words
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