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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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There exists a widely held belief that the printing press
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 is headed towards obsolescence in the near future owing to the ubiquitous
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 to online reading
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.
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 I acknowledge that
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 an opinion prevails, I can not disagree more as printed
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 and paperbacks will always have a special place in our lives.
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 the Internet is considered a popular source of learning and entertainment, it is obvious that not all online reading
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 are free of charge. If someone would like to
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 high-quality content,
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 they have to pay a subscription plan to the service provider.
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, they only can reach the general knowledge.
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, all the research papers written by scientists or researchers are protected and stored in well-known directories
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 as Oxford, or Elsevier.
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, users who are keen on these
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 have to register as paid subscribers so that they can
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 unless only they can read the title or abstract.
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, some people will always choose to purchase printed
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 and
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 for various reasons. Constant pop-up advertisements or message notifications frequently distract readers from their concentration when they try to read free online posts.
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, some people enjoy the experience of reading and collecting physical
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, with some even cherishing the scent of paper that emanates from them. Others collect every paperback written by their favourite authors simply to amass their own physical collections.
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, the assertion that people will no longer pay for printed
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 and
books
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 is highly disputable. It remains untrue to claim that everyone can
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 all reading
materials
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 for free on the Internet.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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