The chart shows British Emigration to selected destinations between 2004 and 2007. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given chart provides information about emigration of British
people
to particular countries from 2004 to 2007.
Overall
, the most popular country for emigrated people
was Australia, while
the lowest number of emigrants would choose New Zealand and the USA over the period given.
As previously mentioned, the Australian rate of overseas citizens accounted for approximately 40 thousand people
over three years(2004,2004 and 2007); however
, in 2006, this
figure reached the peak of more than 50 thousand people
.
On the other hand
, the number of emigrants selecting New Zealand and the Usa was the minimum and accounted for around 20 thousand people
between 2004 and 2007; furthermore
, in New Zealand the number of upcoming people
declined each year. Likewise
, in Spain there was a decrease of 5 million
emigrants over four years and fell down from about 35 million
to less than 30 million
people
. The diagram for France had some fluctuations where the lowest point was less than 20 million
by the end of the period and the highest of around 33 million
in 2005.Submitted by aibiikenurlanova414 on
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