The graph shows data about the annual earnings of three bakeries in Calgary, 2000-2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates how much yearly
revenue
is
received by three different bakeries in Calgary from 2000 to 2010.
Viewing from an Wrong verb form
was
overall
perspective, it can be seen that the revenue
of Mari
Bakeshop
was the highest out of the others while
the other bakeries were lower in the earlier period. However
, as time went on, Amandine Bakery surpassed Mari
Bakeshop
, becoming the highest.
Looking closer, in the span of 6 years, Mari
Bakeshop
get
the most profit, which peaked in 2001 and 2004 at slightly below $90.000, but Verb problem
made
started
from 2004 the amount dropped significantly. Verb problem
apply
Furthermore
, it continued the decreasing trend until the figure hit the lowest point in 2010, exactly gained
$40.000 Wrong verb form
gaining
annualy
.
The other shops did not get much Correct your spelling
annually
revenue
in the first 3 years. Even if the revenue
of both shops was summed, it was just below the Mari
Bakeshop
's revenue
. Although
it was low during the earlier period, in 2007 the revenue
of both Bolo Cakery and Amandine Bakery rose considerably, and in 2008 it soared even higher. Both shops reached its
peak Correct pronoun usage
their
revenue
in 2010 which was slightly over $100.000
for Amandine and marginally over $60.000 for Bolo.Correct your spelling
100,000
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