The graph shows data about the annual earnings of three bakeries in Calgary, 2000-2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The bar chart illustrates how much yearly

revenue

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received by three different bakeries in Calgary from 2000 to 2010. Viewing from an

overall

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perspective, it can be seen that the

revenue

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of

Mari

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Bakeshop

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was the highest out of the others

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the other bakeries were lower in the earlier period.

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, as time went on, Amandine Bakery surpassed

Mari

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Bakeshop

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, becoming the highest. Looking closer, in the span of 6 years,

Mari

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Bakeshop

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get

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the most profit, which peaked in 2001 and 2004 at slightly below $90.000, but

started

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apply

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from 2004 the amount dropped significantly.

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, it continued the decreasing trend until the figure hit the lowest point in 2010, exactly

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$40.000

annualy

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annually

. The other shops did not get much

revenue

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in the first 3 years. Even if the

revenue

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of both shops was summed, it was just below the

Mari

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Bakeshop

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's

revenue

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.

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it was low during the earlier period, in 2007 the

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of both Bolo Cakery and Amandine Bakery rose considerably, and in 2008 it soared even higher. Both shops reached

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peak

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in 2010 which was slightly over $

100.000

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100,000

for Amandine and marginally over $60.000 for Bolo.