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In the past, when student did a university degree, they tended to study in their own country. Nowadays, they have opportunity to study abroad. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development? you should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.

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recent years, we've seen an enormous
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immigration
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from
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students
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student
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students
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 to other countries for studying purposes,
wheter
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whether
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on
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their
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there
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their
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expinse
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expense
, or a sponsor is supporting them
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financially
.
However
, studying abroad
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 some disadvantages because
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 way more expensive for a
student
 to study
out side
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 rather than studying
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 his homeland. But at the same
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 there
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 a lot of advantages, like a more
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sophisticated
 and superior educational system. A
student
probebly
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probably
 won't migrate to a
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foreign
country
 for no sufficient reason to do so, and one reason for
this
 is because of the lack of a good high education in his own
country
.
Thus
,
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 reasonable for a
student
 to go abroad and start his academic journey out there.
This
 will open the
future
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student
 and have more opportunities than those students who taken
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digree
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degree
 in
there
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 own
country
. So
for example
, if we have a
student
 with a
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degree
 from Cambridge, and another
student
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have
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 a
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degree
 from a less known university,
then
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 obvious which one of them will be more likely to find a superb job there studying
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.
However
, the disadvantage of studying
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abroad
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 is that a
student
 might put himself in a
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rapport
rapper
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alone
 and
debts
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 because of the university fees. And for a
student
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this
 will disturb him from actually focusing on the subjects that he is taking, and care more about how he'
ll
 pay all his
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lines
 to the bank in the
future
.
whther
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whether
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ar
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 talking about the first flight that he'
ll
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country
. Or the flat that he'
ll
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 to pay for it every single month
while
 he is there.
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this
 will be even worse if
this
student
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 from a third-world
country
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 currency can't compete against the currency of
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country
 he is willing to study in. All these factors are utterly not
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student
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advantages
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 at all.
To sum up
,
while
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obtaing
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obtaining
 a
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degree
 from a
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foreign
 university could have some advantages, like a
more bright
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brighter
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future
. A
student
 should know that he'
ll
 be spending so much for
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future
.
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