Studying abroad can be highly motivational for students nd also ínpire their dreams. However, whilst studying abroad can have a number of positive effects on students, there are also many difficulties that they may meet along the ways. With this in mind, it is more advantagous to study at home. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer.

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more people

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for better education outside their nations. Many

students

choose to acquire knowledge through studying abroad

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some others claim that studying in their

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home

countries

is more advantageous. I am a strong advocate of studying in foreign lands, and I suppose it could possibly bring more benefits than studying at home. First

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all, studying abroad helps

students

to enhance more academic knowledge.

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have strong development in the

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Technology

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, Science,

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,…

that is

why many

students

from other

countries

worldwide want to study in these

countries

to gain more knowledge.

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students

have more chance to put theories into practice by working as an intern in a prominent company to improve their capabilities. On the other

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, studying abroad is more beneficial in promoting social skills, which help youngsters to become more

self- motivation

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and improve communication skills.

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is necessary to communicate and integrate themselves into

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environment through workshops or join in other group discussions.

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that way,

students

will be more confident when they have to confront

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different situations that need to use their own skills.

To sum up

, studying overseas brings more pros than cons for

students

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as well as

looking for

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jobs.

Therefore

,

students

can take studying abroad into consideration in the future.