The line graph shows the average number of weekly patients visiting four clinics of a hospital from 2010 to 2016.

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line graph highlights information about how many people visited four different directions of one hospital between 2010 and 2016. As an

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almost all clinics increased their numbers of patients, except for birth control, which ended in 2016 with the same figure. Regarding birth control, it started with 245 visitors in 2010 After that, its number went up slightly to 275 in 2012 and dropped dramatically to 175 in 2014. But in the end, it returned the previous figure. it can be clearly seen that the eye clinic experienced a rocket

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period. It was a gradual increase from 120 to 150 in 2012, followed by a sharp jump to 350 visitors in 2016, which was the highest number

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year. If we look at the diabetic and dental directions of the hospital, they fluctuated through the six years. The dental clinic went down from 100 to 50 in 2012,

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it had a shoot-up in 2014, which was stable till 2016 with a number of 130.

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diabetic clinic increased its numbers from 60, the lowest, compared to others, to the second one in 2016. It went up negligibly to 90 patients in 2014 and jumped rapidly to 180 in 2016.